A Vivid Spanking Simile

I love the vivid simile in this excerpt from a recent post at The Punishment Book:

Anyway, after my bottom was sore and glowing red he said, ‘Now, go stand with your nose against the door while I think about the second half of your punishment.’

I heard him open the wardrobe and there was the clack of the canes that hang in there like hungry vampire bats. I shuddered…

Hungry vampire bats? I’ve got them in my closet, too. Imagine the cheesey Transylvanian accent: “Ve vant to be biting your butt!”

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